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I want to be your Mickey Mouse
The one that you hold
    Even though you're a boy
    Even though you're too old
I want to be that necessary.

Because I am so opposite
              so, completely, unnecessary
                                          unexplainable
                                             uncomfortable,

I find comfort in your unintentions
                         my pitiful fixations
            our unattached sensations

That send me spiralling into hopelessness
                                   accidental carelessness
                        self-inflicted emptiness

That leaves unencumbered waste
                                a bitter aftertaste
                                             in my
                                                             
                                             heart.
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Thrown together while I was skipping 5th period today for a writing contest thing... Theme is like, "Taste of Poetry" or something.

Image: "sad heart" by Bella Cicci

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:iconpeacejunkie:
Damn chica... I love it. Why is it that the stuff you always just seem to throw together kicks such major ass?

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Look in the mirror and tell me with a straight face that you have any idea who the hell the person looking back at you is. Then you can critique my actions.
:iconuglyduckling323:
Thanks hunny!!! Do you mean "you" as in "Jess" or "you" as in "the general population?"

=p

jeez, way to be over-analytical, Jessica.

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Time wounds all heals- John Lennon
:iconpeacejunkie:
I mean you as in Jessica. <3

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Look in the mirror and tell me with a straight face that you have any idea who the hell the person looking back at you is. Then you can critique my actions.
:iconuglyduckling323:
oh. Heh heh :blush: I love you!

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Time wounds all heals- John Lennon
:iconpeacejunkie:
love you too. lol

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Look in the mirror and tell me with a straight face that you have any idea who the hell the person looking back at you is. Then you can critique my actions.
:icondisastercake:
what does loin mean? i forget.

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~Allie :frail:

Poetry is best when written in fits of raw emotion and near insanity. -Self

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:iconuglyduckling323:
"Out" =)

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Time wounds all heals- John Lennon
:iconturtlemans11:
i think i missed the meaning but then again i dont think you expect me to understand

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you dont need a pareshute to sky dive you need a pareshute to sky dive twice

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:iconuglyduckling323:
I do not except you to understand... I love you though... xD

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Time wounds all heals- John Lennon

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